ApolloImSorry's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[secksy pfp]

Seems like a fun guy hehe

The expression is great. The subtle wobbleness on the eyes add a lot of charm.

The simple shading works.

I like the solid colors you used.

If anything, I'm not sure about the color spots on the cheeks. Probably could have used another color or made them a bit more subtle.

Nice job. Cheers!

phliqqy responds:

thank u!!

the color spots on the cheeks are supposed to be like blush, but i understand why it looks weird lolol. ill do it lighter and with a different shade next time. thank you for the criticism~ ☆ ～('▽^人)

[Six's second Outfit]

This is a very nice concept.

The scyfy elements are subtle and integrate nicely.

The anatomy seems great, but I'm not a great fan of the lips though that's probably the style you want to use.

The sleeves I like a lor, the zippers look cool.

Keep it up, Cheers.

DymondRabbit responds:

Thank you so much for the reply! (just saw it... like a month later XD) Yeah i like the big lips but i still gotta find a way to make it work well. THANK YOU for the feed back!

[Nine (OC)]

Great avatar!

The colors make a great match, her skin tone is on point and the subtle gradient on the hair works nicely.

You could try to vary your line's weight, specially for the hair and face (the nose could really use lines that get thinner as they reach the end).

Nice shadow around the neck, helps your sillouette a lot and overall contrast.

Keep it up. Cheers!

MS9Art responds:

Thank you! I appreciate the thorough critique -- line weight is something I'm really gonna try to understand, its a lot more important than I initially thought. I oftentimes forget it completely when doing pieces :c

[Patchwork Creature i have yet to name]

This is a very cool concept, I specially like the sword and what I assume is a button shield/guard, very clever.

The light beam and overall background is very good at making your character stand out, great job.

What you could improve is the runes on the obelisk. What I would do is increase the size of each rune, increase the space between them, and arrange them 1 by 1 in a vertical stack...

Also I didn't get what the silver thing behind his hat was supposed to be.

Last nitpick, the right leg sits on top of that small patch of grass' fill layer, just letting you know, but it could also be a choice...

Anyway, hope this helps you and again, nice job!

NoctisTheDollmaker responds:

Thanks, for the advice, will keep that in mind for future drawings.